With a calmness so ominous.
With a confidence so dominant.
With a familiarity so anonymous.
Is that elegance I see?
In your eyes hides an ocean.
In your heart lies a sea.
In your stillness there’s still a motion.
Is that elegance I see?
You are littered with scars and wounds.
You are ablaze in the ice cold doom.
You are the rising tide; the typhoon.
Is that elegance I see?
In you I have seen modesty.
In you I have seen courage.
In you I have seen dignity.
But now, Is that elegance I see?
For no matter what my words say.
My thoughts poured out are still astray.
For your soul has me captured.
I’m standing still, enraptured.
I realize elegance has so much more than what we see.
For my love, you are incomparable to me.
In you I see the future so bright.
In you I see a dark past seeking light.
Tell me I’m wrong and I won’t care.
For you have changed the meaning of elegance for me.
It is no more a mere scratch on the sheet.
It lies now in the shadows of imperfections.
So beautiful and bare.
It is not just grace, charm and beauty.
To me, it is an out worldly electricity.
Because every time I see you fall and get back up ,
I know you’re so much more than just a buildup .
At times a sophisticated beast.
I know you can be a demon on two feet.
Slaying monsters as you go.
Sometimes I wonder,
Whether it’s you who makes the rivers flow.
Or did you carve out the valleys?
The little hills and stones?
But then I lose my chain of thoughts,
As I see you help mend broken bones.
Honestly;
I don’t know what elegance means anymore,
Because for me it is solely this woman. Enchanted, mesmerized or call me hypnotized .
All I know is that I see,
Pure elegance in her eyes.
-Megha Bhartiya 💜
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Daily Prompt word – Elegance
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THAT IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL MADAME 😄😁
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Thanks UNVGE 😄
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😁
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so beautiful and elegant….written to the best shape possible….great…!
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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in fact we liked each other work ….at the same time….nice timings…!
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Yes I noticed that myself!
I was just reading your other works and they’re all such lovely compositions. 😄
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thank you…honoured….!
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Ohmygod this is amazingg <3
(like always)
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Thank you Shruti! 😄
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Amazing work!
Magical metaphors and wonderful words used.
Enigma
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Thank you Enigma! I’m so happy you liked it 💜
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Correction, I loved it.
My pleasure!
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Aah, and my happiness knows no bound anymore! 😊
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Happiness should never have any limits… ;)
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True, just as you always seem to be 😄
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Wonderful poem! Your rhyme is perfect and does not feel forced at all, the flow is great (especially how it seems to quicken toward the end)
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KaylaAnn I’m truly honored you found my poem wonderful. Your comment means a lot to me. Thank you! 💕
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You’re welcome :)
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Wonderful poem with a wonderful flow ! I stumbled across your blog thanks to shruti and I’m glad I did :)
What drew me in was your caption though- a drop of ink may make a million think. Its utterly beautiful. And so true :)
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Thank you Ayesha. I’m glad you liked it 💕.
Ah Shruti, such an amazing person she is :)
And this beautiful quote by Lord Byron “A drop of ink may make a million think.” has always been one of my favorites. 😄
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Agreed :) This was the first time I heard of it so I guess I owe you a thankyou for introducing me to such a wonderful quote :D
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Oh believe me, the pleasure was all mine. 😄
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Beautiful post with an absolute beautiful choice of words. I have always liked the way you write. Glad to have found you my name twin ;)
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Thank you so much! I’m lucky to share my name with you 😊💕
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Aww..Thanks.
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Beautiful composition…well penned
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Thank you! 💕
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Wow. What a beautiful piece of writing. I was actually playing a guitar in my head. Words are so perfectly used. You should write songs. Again, this was wow.
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Oh God. You have no idea how happy your words just made me! Thank you so much, really I’m so glad you enjoyed it! 😄💜
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I should be thanking you for writing this elegant poem (story, and song too) :). I am so obsessed with this poem in just mere seconds.
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I’m literally so happy right now, thanks to you and your kind words 😊! Just the thought that you enjoyed it so much is more than enough to make me happy. 😄💜💕
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Here’s a little addition to this poem;
Or,did you mesmerize me?
maybe this was meant to be.
It is colossal and still wee
Is that elegance I see?
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That is lovely! You seem to be so talented yourself, why don’t you give a try to song writing? I would love to hear from you someday. 💕😄
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I smiled the whole time reading this, and had to read it twice! Love it 💕
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Thank you so much! 😊💕
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Exquisitely beautiful.
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Thank you! Glad you like it 💜
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I really did!
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